3 stars: Is that it? I know it's a free game, but you'd think it would have a bit more to it than that. I was just getting into the story as well; there were a few grammar mistakes but the story itself was pretty solid. Should be double the length. Disappointing!
3 stars: It was alright for a free title. Certainly not as bad as I read around here. The ending was anticlimactic though, I got no closure from the one last page.
3 stars: Its a good story just felt like it ended a bit short. The journey of the protagonist can be much longer, and a player always wants to see the results of there coices, this game didn't show eny results of the coices you make in the story.The game has a lot of potential just needs some work on an extended ending.
5 stars: Congrats mary.not played yet,but i am positive this will be great 😁 really hope you will write another story,i love this. *whine*but whats with the food choices?sooo hungry.lol Last comment,people that are dissing this story,feel free to sumbit YOUR novel yeah? Can you do better??????
4 stars: Not particularly good but worth the free price. The game was short but fulfilled the promise of chronicling a single story.
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