3 stars: I love the concept behind it, the idea is extremely cool, but the writing bogs it down tremendously. It really needs a good run through an editor; it almost reads like a first draft. The pacing is especially bad, some parts fast, others slow. And alot happens seemingly without much reason. Particularly at the beginning. A lot of potential, but also alot to be done to have realized. I really want to see it though.
4 stars: There are some typos and some areas where \
3 stars: The story has a interesting plot and I wouldn't mind reading a sequel if one ever pops out. What I think holds it back from being great however is the grammar and pacing; certain sections didn't feel right to read and things were jumping around too much for me to be invested with the characters and what was happening.
4 stars: I was originally going to give this a three, but in all honesty for all it's flaws I definitely feel it was worth a fiver. The main issue with the writing is the typos and sentence structure, perhaps the writer's first language is not english? The other issue for me is that it feels as though the options you choose barely affect your stats and that renders them useless. Highly recommend though and look forward to a future update.
4 stars: There're a lot of spelling and grammar error, as well as sentences that make no sense\u2014likely done while editing on the fly. Non-binary characters automatically use the confusing \
5 stars: To be honest, it had a bet...