5 stars: Really liked the story however theres a bug in the first choice that effects your stats if you choose the volatile choice it wont change your stats at all also theres a moment when Humils pronouns change from they them to he him for one page other than that im really enjoying the game 👍👍
5 stars: It has been a long time since a Choice book has captured me so strongly. Definitely give this a go.
4 stars: Played the demo on the forum so I have great expectations!
3 stars: I really wanted to like this one. It has a well made world and interesting concept. But the characters are bland, and the system by which your stats affect success is confusing. It can be hard to determine which stat is checked, and even if you get the right one that doesn't always mean success. There are situations where you simply cannot succeed no matter what you do and that fact hampers the story.
2 stars: It was quite enjoyable at first, but towards the end it decides to railroad you out of a choice that was seemingly being worked up to the whole game: whether to betray your initial faction. From that point on, you have no choice but to fight the 'enemy' and hence this is no longer a cyoa. This is just a story, and a ultimately bland one at that.
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